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Jack itched to ram the gun back into Paul’s mouth, but forced himself not to. Instead, he exited the car, pulled Paul out, and threw him into the trunk. With a pounding heart, he drove off into the rainy night. After circling the block three times, he made up his mind. With accelerating wipers, he navigated to Roosevelt Avenue, pulled over, and yanked Paul out of the trunk.

Note: Also should it be 1 paragraph?

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Without context, it is hard to understand whether the severity or tenseness of "Jack itched to ram the gun back into Paul's mouth", is a relevant sentence, but it's striking. Good usage of active speech.

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